Thursday, 25 October 2012

Homework Challenge - Week 2

Children, have a look at the holiday stories from all of the kids in our class. Read them yourself if you can, or get Mum and Dad to help you. Now think of one thing that you could say about someone's picture and story and have your Mum or Dad help you comment on it. You could say their story is funny or interesting. You could say you like their picture because they used nice colours. You could say which one you liked and why. Anything you can think of.

Our Holiday Stories


I went to Sissy Bay. We went in a kayak. We went in the spa. I liked the bubbles! My sisters didn’t like them. By Joel




I saw a hydro slide in the sky when I was at home. It was a shape in the clouds. By Vic



In my holidays I went to the Sky Tower in Auckland. We had to find some letters when we were up in the tower and it was fun. By Karlos



I went to Hokitika. It was a long time until we got there. We went to heaps of shops! By Alyssa



This is my mother, Jackson and me. We are sliding down on the rainbow. By Meadow



I went to the pools and my Mum and Dad are following me. I was in the pool swimming. By Malia


I was playing in the rain in Christchurch at my Granny’s place. It felt good. I got soaked. Then I got a lolly pop from Granny’s cupboard. By Rosy



I like to ride my bike to the shop. I like to get $1 mixtures! By Mikaia



I am sleeping and I lost a tooth. I put it under my pillow and I got some money for it. I have it a home in a little pocket on a pillow. By Becky



I went to the park with my Mum and Dad and my baby sister, and my other two sisters. I played on the swing and Alisha climbed up the slide. By Eden



I saw a colourful rainbow outside my house. By Ollie



Yesterday I saw cloud patterns in the sky. One was a cat. Another one was a normal cloud, but it was pink. The last cloud was a car. We were driving under a rainbow when we went to the pool. By Abby



I made a new woodshed with my Dad. I had to bang nails in and I drilled screws in. I took all the rubbish and put it in a pile. We loaded the rubbish onto the back of our ute. By Isaiah



My friend called Lily is nice to me. She is not nice to my baby sister. My baby sister is only two. By Aatea



Sophia came over for a sleep over. We slept in the lounge. We watched two movies! We went in the spa. Sophia is a giggler! By Jorgia



My friend came over to my house the other day. By Patrick