Story Writing in Room 2

In Room 2 we are writing recounts. A recount is a story about something we have done (we can remember a recount)! Here are some of our stories.

Jack T wrote...

Last Saturday we went to the speedway. We watched the teams race. Nelson Tigers versed the Glen Eagles. The Glen Eagles won and the Nelson Tigers lost. After the teams raced it was the sidecars. We saw a sidecar crash. It was a really bad crash. I will tell you about it. The red one's passenger bumped into the orange driver and then the orange driver spun around like this... 0 ...and smashed the orange passenger. He died because the sidecar smashed the orange passenger.

Abigail wrote...

On Saturday Mum rang Chrissy and we met at Chrissy's house. Then we had a little play. Then we went to Rabbit Island. First we went to the beach. Then we had lunch. After lunch we went for a walk through the bushes.

Isamaeli wrote...

On Saturday we went to Takaka Mountain. We threw snow balls. After that we went to a waterfall. I got wet. We had dinner. Then we roasted marshmallows. After that we went to bed in the tent.

Adriena wrote...

On Sunday I went to church with Pearl, Safia, Daddy, Mum, Nancy, Zoe and Jody. Also after church we went to the park. We also went to the Sunday Market. We bought candyfloss and I saw my old friend Libby.

Hinaia wrote...

On Saturday I went to a party. It was William's birthday. He got a sticky spider and two cakes. It was a chocolate cake and an orange cake. I tried the chocolate cake. It was yummy.

Didn't Room 2 do well?

And now here is our challenge to you...

Here is a story Mia wrote in her free writing time. She did not get to finish it. Can you think of a good finish for her narrative?

Once upon a time there was a family of bunnies, a father, a mother and a baby. One day the mother and the baby went for a walk to the shop to get some berries when out from the bushes jumped a big boot that nearly stood on them.